shreddeathpunk7's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Feral Fox - Frozen World]

-Garbage

What Irks me is they let you post your shit here. Horrible work, now ain't that constructive???

btw: STOP USING THE SAME FUCKING SYNTHS.

Feral-Fox responds:

Well this is new
What Irks me is dush bags like you that have no idea about anything, its like you dident even listen to anything I have. I dident use them synths in my other tracks, maby a tiny bit simular do to my style in some songs, so maby if you got that huge cock out of your ear and stoped giving your dad oral when reviewing it wouldent be like this.

PS Thanks for the review :p

[Khuskan - Tombstone]

Meh.

I'm sorry your music fucking sucks...

Khuskan responds:

Said the person with two tracks scoring 1.89 and 1.88 respectively.

[Unfinished Trance]

Omg this sucks

What a crappy song, the kick is muffled and has no drive whatsoever, your bassline is weak and doesn't carry the song. The melodies are inconsistent and your composition has no real arrangement. This song in all honesty sucks. NG has waaaaaay too many overated songs. Honestly, this song doesn't deserve to be high up there. Goes to show that NG fans don't know shit about music. I can do and have done better.

[Tetris on Speed]

Could use refinement.

Ok, I'm usually not compelled to write reviews, but this Tetris "remix" if you can call it that, wasn't so bad it was actually a decent listen, now I don't agree that it's "ipod" worthy. I'll have you know that first of all, your mixdown is pretty bland and the stereo spectre lacks so much panning, I know this isn't the next "Air For Life", but still a good and clean mixdown and master is what makes a track stand out. A crisp tone is what you would be looking here to this kind of music. It just seems like alot of your synths are dry, although you manage to capture the vintage analog sound of an 8-bit processor. I suggest you really polish this before you can personally agree that it's a diamond track. In all honesty it's highliy over rated.

I'd like to discuss this more with you.

AIM: CRISHENDRIX77
AIM:CRISTIANFMUSIC
MSN: [e-mail]

HouseMasta responds:

I completely agree with you, that it why you need to check out my Tetris Dirty Remix, which is FAR superior to this song. Anyway, expect an IM from me in 2 months, as I am leaving the USA on a cruise. Sorry, but I'll be back later.

-Steve

[«WHISPERS» [DEMO] .:EN3RGIE:.]

Nice Kick.

First thing I notice about the track is the over-used "hale-bopp" preset on vanguard. Kick is actually decent. Pads are too loud. Melody is nice. Bass is too static lacks any originality whatsoever, has been heard in almost EVERY trance track dating from 1997. everything is too loud and the mixdown just doesn'nt cut it for any standards of "a good trance tune" I doubt it would move any one on the dancefloor. Try eqing some of your sounds and pads and layering because it sounds muddy and all mushed together.

[During The Storm]

Beginning was ok.

Due to the low bit rate capacity that plagues Newgrounds, I'm not going to focus on clarity. Now on to the main part of the review. I definetly like the beginning with the soundfx, other than that the songs mood is absolutely destroyed. Mainly by that extremely horrendous entrance of that saw synth. Next is the fact that there is almost no individuality with each instruments, the mix down is really bad. The kick is virtually not there, I can't hear it. The cheesy thunder sound is really odd. Now of course, every trance song has to have a hook right? Not the case here. The melody is a really original but not really all that memorable. Next we have the bassline which really sounds like a paper shredder. The arp is nicely implemented. And of course comes the cheesiest of melodies at 1:53 which sounds like a cheap knock-off for the insipid melodies of "B0unc3". The mixdown and virtually no mastering make this track garbage. But then again all the songs on here usually suck. I'm not hating on you. Just giving you feedback, like you asked. It'd be nice to see what you can accomplish once you read up an article on proper mixing and good song implementation. IM me, I want to help you out, get your sound polished and away from this n00b garbage on NG, all of it is...

Anima-Theory responds:

Some one is very critical :P

The thunder sound effects are real thunder, and the rain is real rain, so i sorta cant help the way real thunder sounds.

I didn't think the mood was destroyed by the sudden change, the beginning was only a build up.

The kick is quite predominant, if you have decent speakers, you cant hear the kick on mine, but if you put head phones in you can hear it clearly. Plus I had to turn the kick down due to clipping.

I dont know what you mean by a hook.

Its also really hard to make a trance song memorable because most good riffs are already taken.

I thought the bassline sounded cool and alot of trance songs use that type of bass for their bassline.

I like B0UNC3's type of genre, thats probably why my music sometimes sounds similiar to his.

But I will try and fix what you commented on, after all i have to please the masses.

So thanks for the review anyways

Anima_Theory

[Somedumbtrippingelectronicsong]

Nice bassline

Nice rolling bassline, that's about my only compliment, your analog synths an your saw lines are absolutely disgusting. You have no eq tweaking abilities whatsoever, have you ever hear of a free filter? Or quite possibly a compressor? Otherwise the acid lines are the only thing I like aside from the bassline. I could call your weird song arrangement originality, or really fake and talentless composing, Ill go with the latter. Your souds collide an your mixown sounds horrbile. No real melody just your stereotypical instruments. I think you should definetly find a new genre to mess up. This my friend is absolutely bad. kudos.

cosmicrandom responds:

You think I was actually being serious when I made this song? HA!

[P_P-Above The Surface]

Ew

I don't care how not hard you worked on this, it sounds like crap, basic FL Studio sounds te melody is absolutely insipid the kick is disgusting, you really need to extend your options, for a drum and bass song it really has no bass and no drums, please, try your hardest next time, because this is horrible, I'm not one to usually flame on things but this is disgusting. Im sorry it's just I'm honest.

Para-Noid responds:

well when i say im not putting hard work in it means it probably not gonna be good. at all

[DJ Kazmo - Falling Skies]

It was ok

The beeps (I'm assuming it was the Wasp) Needs more delay, you need a better bassline, that 1 hides in the mix too much and doesnt stand out, need a subbass for your kicks, highats need some panning, they sound dry and stale. Overall the track lacks drive and no real energy is felt from it, your breakdown is annoying with that little zap sound, a drum roll would help introduce the build up because it was unexpected and sloppy how it just broke into the kick again. Needs alot of elements, definetly wouldn't move the dancefloor.

Kazmo responds:

Just like to point out that there's a difference between trance, and techno. Trance has that mellow feel to it, while techno is usually the stuff that has drive, this song is more for just soft listening, not for the dancefloor. Thanks for commenting though.